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story by Marcel Hart, written by Joey Bishop
it was another normal day out on the boat with his fishing crew for Kevin Salvador. they were hauling up a load of fish when they felt lots of hard ripples in the water toppling there boat every where. it had almost tipped over once before the captain yelled out to everyone to get inside and get home. Kevin knew that none of this type of weather was forecasted and the weirdest thing was that it wasnt even windy when it started to topple. the waves had just come out of nowhere, there wasnt a boat nearby, there wasnt wind and it wasnt forecasted. like most things that kevin thought strange to himself in life, he just shrugged it off and thought that perhaps there was a whale beneath him but what was actually underneath him was much much bigger than that. they had started to go into shore and could just see land over the horizon. "woah, did you see that?" kevin turned around to see who had said it. tim was the person who had said it. "what did you see Tim?" asked Jimmy the youngest person on board at the age of 21, sometimes kevin thought of how Jimmy could ever want to do this kind of job. ussually kids his age would be doing things that they considered 'fun' such as making bikes, and some sort of thing that kevin heard called video game consoles. kevin had no idea what those console things were but he knew that they were 'the thing of the next generation' or something like that. " i saw some sort of fin thing come out of the water. but it wasnt a shark or a dolphin it was much too big for that, it was grey and looked kind of like a stone."
"you must be imagining things Tim" said James the sort of leader of the group. he was very muscular and seemed to always be chewing gum, he had a fishing hat with lures hangning off of it, he had a brown beard that went down to his chest and ended off in a little ponytail. his hair sort of blended in with his beard being not so long in the back and having no fringe in the front, but the sides were long and just sort of fused in with his beard. he was missing half of his left arm as well which led Kevin to wondor why excactly he was let into this job where you quite clearly need to have 2 hands at the ready at all times. he was never in a jumper even on the coldest of days, he was always in a green or blue vest. that had lures in the right pockets. "yeah you're probably right James, im just imagining things. then the boat hit something. at first Kevin thought it was a rock or something but then he saw something rising up from the water behind him. the skin of it was tinted slightly blue and slightly green. it had lots of spike things on its back and little elf ears. its eyes were small but its mouth looked like it could swallow five buses whole. its nostrils were just two little slits on the side of its nose. its arms were big and round and had sharp clawed hands sitting on the end of them. then the hand swiped down at the boat. and split it in half. Kevin saw James be split in half right before his eyes and saw Jimmy get crushed by a bit of the boat falling on top of him. it was only Kevin, Tim and maybe the captain but Kevin wasnt quite sure if he had survived or not. kevin jumped off of the boat and sunk abit before bobbing up his head again and looking at the destruction in front of him. Kevin was sure that the captain was dead now. Tim bobbed up next to Kevin and started to swim towards the land, Kevin took one last look at the carnage before him and started to swim after Tim. Kevin caught up but the beast wasnt far apart from them. Tim started to scream for his life. Kevin turned around to see the beasts eyes look deeply into Tims eyes. Then it went under the water. Kevin yelled to Tim to stop it and Tim did stop. after about thorty seconds of looking around and waiting for something to happen, something did happen. tim was lifted into the air in the mouth of the beast right next to kevin.the beast then sunk back into the ocean slowly and started to go deeeper into the ocean again. Kevin just sat there and started to sob because of what had just happened. he would rather have himself eaten to save everyone else. he started to swim back to shore after he had finished sobbing. it took about an hour but eventually he did get to shore and immediately fainted on the beach. he wakes up in the morning covered in salty air and a few barnacles. someone was shaking him to get up. he coughs up a little water and then blacks out again. he then wakes up in a hospital being wheeled into a room rapidly before he blacks out again. later he wakes up in a hospital room in a gown and lying in bed sweating more than he has ever seen him self sweat in his life time before. no one else in the room with him so he gets up and goes to the hall at his door. his wife and children are waiting at the door crying, until they see him standing there watching them cry. his wife runs past the guard and hugs him. the 2 children also run to him and jump on him as well.

"what happened to the rest of your crew kevin" asked kevins wife luccille after she put the kids to bed and sat down in the lounge room to face him and comfort him.
" Luccille theyre... they uh..." he starts to say but just cant stomach the fact that all his life friends have been brutally murdered. Luccille puts her hands over her mouth. "Honey its ok you dont need to say anything else to me i understand"
"Honey I saw something... Something unearthly, it was like a giant lizard... It had a giant hand that came down and... i watched on in horror as it split james in half. it followed us and killed Tim just for the hell of it. Tim wasnt being a threat he was just trying to get away like i was but he was too slow. I dont know where the captain..." he put his hand over his eyes and started to sob slowly.
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my youtube character: rough sketch
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Chapter 2:

We are still in the building looking down a huge gap in it. Were sitting down and are just about to start going down the stairs when one of my work friends comes around the corner and stares at me then starts walking towards me. “hey james why haven’t you got out yet?” I ask him.
“Well it’s a pretty long story, you see”
He’s just about to sit down and tell me his story then something comes and picks him up and carries him away. “HOLY CRAP” we see the thing come back around and see James fall to the ground. “CRAP COLIN RUN, GET TO THE STAIRS.”

He does as I ordered and runs as fast as he could. We get to the stairs and start to go down them at about the 5th floor up something rams into the side of the building and it leaves a hole. The hit knocks Colin over and he starts to tumble down the rest of the 5th floor stairs. “crap Colin are you okay?”
“yeah yeah I'm fine keep going!”

we get out and theres nothing out there. We continue along the street until we will get to my house.  I find my parked car and say to Colin to get in. he says ok and we start driving to my house. So while we are driving ill fill you in on my details. I live in Queensland on a stilt-house, we are driving to it now just in the back yard there is a nature preserve that leads to the beach. Were going to try to get our boat and leave the place immediately. Maybe these things wont be wherever were going to go. We continue to drive and I keep on hearing Colin moan or say ow while clutching his leg. “is your leg ok Colin, you took quite the fall down those stairs”
“yeah I'm fine David, it just hurts a little that’s all”

“really because it seems like its broken or something”
“I’ll just have to get a bandage or something when we get to your house”

The car falls silent for a couple of minutes. Its only a half hour drive to my work but this feels like we’ve been driving for hours.
“what do you think those… things were” he asks

“honestly Colin I don’t know, I just don’t know”
“well lets get this straightened out then, they can fly, they have incredible armour or something because if they didn’t then the one at our work wouldn’t have rammed into the side of the building or made a huge hole in it, theyre obviously huge and they, well I guess the only way to describe it is that they hate humans”

“yeah they sure do”
“another thing is that they are quiet because if they were loud they surely would have woken you up when it made the hole in the building”

“no actually that’s just one of my characteristics, once I'm asleep I don’t wake up till I think I'm ready to”
“how do you know” he starts to laugh.

“oh you want examples, ok then here’s one. When I was a kid I was sleeping one night when my sister Elizabeth , You know beth right?”
“yeah I know her”

“yeah well she came in and actually started jumping on me to wake me up because she was just the most annoying sister she just did it because she couldn’t get to sleep, anyway she was jumping on me and screaming. I think she woke up everyone on the block BUT me so yeah. When I'm asleep I stay asleep.”
We both start to laugh, it makes me wonder how much more laughing we are going to be doing over the next year with the apocalypse and all.

We get to my house after about 5 minutes and then we see my sisters car there.
“godammit Beth” I whisper to my self.

“ its my sister, she's obviously found out about the… uhh you know”
“yeah"
We start to walk up the stairs that lead to the gate on the balcony. We open it up and see beth sitting in a chair at the table on the balcony, she's on her phone.

“WHERE THE HELL WERE YOU DAVID”
She stands up and yells to me. I can see that she has been crying.

“its ok beth I'm here now, you don’t need to worry anymore, its ok” I say while walking up to her to give her a hug. She starts to sob when I put my arms around her. We stay like this for about a minute before she gets up and wipes her face. We all look over the balcony and stay there for a couple of minutes. What was in front of us was not my backyard. My pizza oven had been completely wrecked most of the trees branches had either broken or fallen off completely. And the worst part of it was that there was a dead kangaroo lying on the grass. You could see inside of it see its ribs and organs and blood spilling out slowly. You could see flies swarming around it. But the flies seemed unusually bigger than usual.
Then we saw a huge shadow go over it. Then the shadow went down got bigger until it eventually landed, it was a huge fly. It reached out its sucker I don’t remember what that trunk thing is called and it threw the body up, caught it in its mouth and swallowed. “hey beth was all of this like this when you got here?”

“yeah… yeah it was”
With that the fly flew off and didn’t come back. Beth ran inside with her hands over her face. She was obviously not pleased with the presentation that was just held in front of her. She always loved animals.

“when she was a kid she always begged to be a vet” I say to Colin without glancing his way once when I say it.
“I said to her that she shouldn’t be because she wont just see cute furry animals, there would be ones that would be in horrible pain, ones that you’d have to put down because they were not well enough. You’ll have to kill them Elizabeth, do you really want to kill poor hurt animals as a living, obviously this got me in trouble with my parents for saying things like that but I didn’t want her to be heart broken when she found out that being a vet isn’t a good thing. To this day she is still trying to get a job as a vet and I don’t think anyone is going to be able to stop her.”

Colin doesn’t know what to say so I take the opportunity and keep going.
“I’d say to her if you want to work with animals work in a zoo you’d still see hurt animals occasionally but nothing like what you’d see in a vet.”

I pause for a second before I keep going again.
“I guess what I'm trying to say is that I don’t want her to be sad, I would get myself in trouble who knows how many times to try and keep her safe but she just wouldn’t listen. I may fight with her, but I still love her”

Colin just stands there with his head just sort of there dangling off his neck drooping down and looking at the balcony.
“eventually Elizabeth chose to be a scientist, but guess what sort of science she chose. That’s right animal behaviour she knows a lot about how animals work maybe if we kill one of those fly things she will be able to determine what sort of unholy beasts they are” I decide to just stop talking because I know that its bumming Colin out. Then he reveals one of his biggest secrets to me.

“I had a brother”
That’s all I needed to hear before I gave went up to him and gave him a hug. I don’t know what happened to his brother but I know that he is sad about it. I shouldn’t have said those things about my sister. Know I feel really bad.

“his name was Ethan he was just 13 when he died. He was skateboarding to school one day on a bad road and he got hit by a car it was all over the news.”
I start to remember some news I saw one night about exactly that situation.

“mum made a video about how bad the pathways are and how people will get hurt just like her little baby”
He chuckles a little like hes remembering something good.

“i feel bad because the last time I saw him I was being a dick to him, he was trying to get something and I kept running away with it in my hands above my head. I said to him ‘come on get it get it shorty get it’ he hit me and got me in trouble and before he went to bed that night I said I wish you would die you’re only ever mean to me. I don’t know why but I feel responsible.”
“I'm sorry Colin I really am, I didn’t know anything about it, I'm not going to try to try to make you feel better, because I know you don’t want to be bothered after something like that. Just go up the hall way and into the first door on the left after the toilet and bathroom.”

Well now I feel absolutely terrible. I look around one more time and then just go to bed.



in memory of Ethan Stephenson
story by Marcel Hart, written by Joey Bishop
it was another normal day out on the boat with his fishing crew for Kevin Salvador. they were hauling up a load of fish when they felt lots of hard ripples in the water toppling there boat every where. it had almost tipped over once before the captain yelled out to everyone to get inside and get home. Kevin knew that none of this type of weather was forecasted and the weirdest thing was that it wasnt even windy when it started to topple. the waves had just come out of nowhere, there wasnt a boat nearby, there wasnt wind and it wasnt forecasted. like most things that kevin thought strange to himself in life, he just shrugged it off and thought that perhaps there was a whale beneath him but what was actually underneath him was much much bigger than that. they had started to go into shore and could just see land over the horizon. "woah, did you see that?" kevin turned around to see who had said it. tim was the person who had said it. "what did you see Tim?" asked Jimmy the youngest person on board at the age of 21, sometimes kevin thought of how Jimmy could ever want to do this kind of job. ussually kids his age would be doing things that they considered 'fun' such as making bikes, and some sort of thing that kevin heard called video game consoles. kevin had no idea what those console things were but he knew that they were 'the thing of the next generation' or something like that. " i saw some sort of fin thing come out of the water. but it wasnt a shark or a dolphin it was much too big for that, it was grey and looked kind of like a stone."
"you must be imagining things Tim" said James the sort of leader of the group. he was very muscular and seemed to always be chewing gum, he had a fishing hat with lures hangning off of it, he had a brown beard that went down to his chest and ended off in a little ponytail. his hair sort of blended in with his beard being not so long in the back and having no fringe in the front, but the sides were long and just sort of fused in with his beard. he was missing half of his left arm as well which led Kevin to wondor why excactly he was let into this job where you quite clearly need to have 2 hands at the ready at all times. he was never in a jumper even on the coldest of days, he was always in a green or blue vest. that had lures in the right pockets. "yeah you're probably right James, im just imagining things. then the boat hit something. at first Kevin thought it was a rock or something but then he saw something rising up from the water behind him. the skin of it was tinted slightly blue and slightly green. it had lots of spike things on its back and little elf ears. its eyes were small but its mouth looked like it could swallow five buses whole. its nostrils were just two little slits on the side of its nose. its arms were big and round and had sharp clawed hands sitting on the end of them. then the hand swiped down at the boat. and split it in half. Kevin saw James be split in half right before his eyes and saw Jimmy get crushed by a bit of the boat falling on top of him. it was only Kevin, Tim and maybe the captain but Kevin wasnt quite sure if he had survived or not. kevin jumped off of the boat and sunk abit before bobbing up his head again and looking at the destruction in front of him. Kevin was sure that the captain was dead now. Tim bobbed up next to Kevin and started to swim towards the land, Kevin took one last look at the carnage before him and started to swim after Tim. Kevin caught up but the beast wasnt far apart from them. Tim started to scream for his life. Kevin turned around to see the beasts eyes look deeply into Tims eyes. Then it went under the water. Kevin yelled to Tim to stop it and Tim did stop. after about thorty seconds of looking around and waiting for something to happen, something did happen. tim was lifted into the air in the mouth of the beast right next to kevin.the beast then sunk back into the ocean slowly and started to go deeeper into the ocean again. Kevin just sat there and started to sob because of what had just happened. he would rather have himself eaten to save everyone else. he started to swim back to shore after he had finished sobbing. it took about an hour but eventually he did get to shore and immediately fainted on the beach. he wakes up in the morning covered in salty air and a few barnacles. someone was shaking him to get up. he coughs up a little water and then blacks out again. he then wakes up in a hospital being wheeled into a room rapidly before he blacks out again. later he wakes up in a hospital room in a gown and lying in bed sweating more than he has ever seen him self sweat in his life time before. no one else in the room with him so he gets up and goes to the hall at his door. his wife and children are waiting at the door crying, until they see him standing there watching them cry. his wife runs past the guard and hugs him. the 2 children also run to him and jump on him as well.

"what happened to the rest of your crew kevin" asked kevins wife luccille after she put the kids to bed and sat down in the lounge room to face him and comfort him.
" Luccille theyre... they uh..." he starts to say but just cant stomach the fact that all his life friends have been brutally murdered. Luccille puts her hands over her mouth. "Honey its ok you dont need to say anything else to me i understand"
"Honey I saw something... Something unearthly, it was like a giant lizard... It had a giant hand that came down and... i watched on in horror as it split james in half. it followed us and killed Tim just for the hell of it. Tim wasnt being a threat he was just trying to get away like i was but he was too slow. I dont know where the captain..." he put his hand over his eyes and started to sob slowly.

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I meant the kid riding on the giant scorpion. XD
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